You
will cry over a giant bug!
"untitled”
Edited Written, and Drawn
– Jack Kirby
Lettered and Inked – Mike
Royer
February 1974
We’ll
be getting back to doing work-week Batman coverage in just a bit, but first I
wanted to throw out three articles about a very special comics personality that
has an upcoming birthday next week.
I’m
speaking, of course, about the one and only Jack “King” Kirby.
I’ll
share the first Kirby comic I ever read with you next Monday although I bet
many of you could guess which book. Until then I am doing two issues that
wandered into the Crapbox by way of Half-Price. One of these was selected from
their premium book case and ran around $5. Still a steal for a genuine Kirby.
The other was bundled in with a bunch of odds and ends. Both are stellar
examples of Late Kirby art and story.
His
art is brilliant, vibrant and dramatic.
As
for his storytelling, there are some rough edges to these that are clearly noticeable.
Kirby’s writing is a combination of amazing concepts with some odd dialogue
choices. His work is smattered with exposition that feels very “tell”. I’m so
glad that Kirby had a chance to do books on his own, because they shore up many
of his claims about who did what in his original stories with Stan Lee.
But
enough about that, it is a story for another time. Right now our story is
Kamandi, the Last Boy on Earth, issue number 14.
For
those of you who know nothing of Kamandi, allow me to fill in some backstory. I’ll
admit that I wasn’t as familiar with this character as I am with most of the DC
in continuity characters, but I’ve read up on him to fill in the blanks.
Kamandi, the book, takes place in the post-apocalyptic future where an even
called “The Great Disaster” has reduced man back to savagery and given rise to
all manner of highly evolved animals. A sort of a “Planet of the Apes” that’s
just a bit more inclusive.
Into
this wasteland steps a young boy with flowing locks of blonde hair named
Kamandi. His name is derived from the bunker he has lived his life in, a
shelter called “Command D”. He emerges near New York City after his sole
caregiver, his grandfather, is killed by a wolf. The Command D bunker had
volumes of tapes of the Earth before the disastrous event took place, so
Kamandi has some rudimentary knowledge of how things were, but not how things
are now. Kirby uses the boy as both a philosophical sounding board and as an
action hero, but he inhabits a bleak future that even viewed through today’s
nihilistic times, seems excessively dark.
In
fact, the book came about because then DC editor Carmine Infantino tried to get
licensing to make Planet of the Apes comic books given the 1968 movie series’
popularity. Unfortunately he was turned down, so he gave Jack Kirby the task of
creating something LIKE Planet of the Apes. Kirby hadn’t seen the films, but
had a story published called “The Last Enemy!” that was similar in concept that
predated the original PotA’s novel. He also has an unused strip called Kamandi of the Caves that he’d been
hanging on to for over a decade. He whipped up the original story from these
elements and due to the cancellation of his Forever
People book, he eventually was put on as artist too.
This
issue begins with Kamandi engaged in a gladiatorial race against a single
adversary. The story follows a continuation from last issue, I’ll assume, where
there were many competitors but now we are down to Kamandi, his mount and Bull
Bantam, who currently has the Last Boy on Earth entangled in his lasso.
However
bad, Kamandi has it, he’s far better off than the other racers here at Hialeah
Park. I’ll leave it up to the text boxes on this splash page to explain the
rest.
In
stunning shots, we see Bull Bantam’s cruelity as well as the elements that made
Kirby’s house style the Marvel staple for many years. His leap off the page
characters and clear storyboarding need little dialogue to convey the action.
Unfortunately,
Kirby’s one weakness appears here too: dialogue and exposition. The box where
Kamandi is being dragged could be removed with no effect to the panel or what
it conveys. Likewise, the gunshot declaration box. And we know Kamandi would
know to free himself after. It is criminal that he was allowed to edit his own
stuff, in some small way, because an editor might of tightened up the wording a
bit or reworked it. Or in a novel idea of the day, removed it entirely and let
those panels show more of Kirby’s wonderful art. Shame.
Still,
the story is Kirby’s and it is told the way he wanted, warts and all. And
unlike say McFarland’s Spider-Man title, this is still a story I want to see
played out. It might make me wince or shake my head at a line of dialogue, but
there is still a good, grounded tale with a likeable character facing
adversity. I have someone to root for as we’ve shown Kamandi as our underdog
who isn’t Superman nor full of himself. We’ll get to know him even more by
issues end, but for now, he has to regain his mount before Bull Bantam gets
another rope around him.
And
he does! His mount is a giant…grasshopper?
That makes the ones found in the Texas panhandle look small. We also get a
glance at Kamandi’s savior, a Tiger-gent who is somewhere in the rapidly
growing angry crowd.
The
tiger guy is a the son of a rival warlord, Great Caesar. Prince Tuftan dares
anything to rescue his friend Kamandi be killed, which put him and his
entourage in a bit of a pickle as we head into Chapter Two, Winner Take All!
Love
how Kirby’s books used to do this type of breaking up of the story into little
bits like actual novels. It gives the narrative a weight, that, even if it isn’t
earned, I find fun and refreshing.
Tuftan
and his science advisor certainly aren’t having fun, however. Sacker, the owner
of the raceway, has heavily armed guards on hand to quell any disturbance in
the crowd.
While
Kamandi’s friend is led away to an uncertain fate, the star of our book looks
to be in even worse trouble as Bull Bantan’s Buffalo Bashes the last boy’s bug.
It
looks to be all over for Kliklak and Kamandi…
…especially
after this last jump to avoid the blast radius of Bull’s grenade.
Kamandi
proves to have too much heart to go down without a fight. His determination
proves to be too much for Bantan’s ride, who stumbles and bucks Bantan off.
As
Bantan resorts to shots at close range, Kamandi dodges and then disarms his
moronic adversary. In the brawl that follows Kamandi comes out on top. These
nine panels, any of which would make a wonderful poster by themselves, overflow
of Kirby’s amazing sense of proportion, foreshortening, and power. The master
at work.
As
Kamandi triumphs, the crowd goes wild for his thrashing of their champion.
Which
just makes Kamandi even more upset that the world he lives in is the brutal
existence run by animal people who apparently have no moral center. However, if
you can’t get emotionally worked up for any of this cast of man animals, Kirby
does a great job of tugging on our heart strings over the VW Bus-sized
grasshopper Kliklak, who is so sorely wounded that he must be put down.
At
the last moment, we believe that Kamandi has come up with a solution that will
save his insect buddy’s life. But no, it is not to be. Kamandi is merely Lenny
putting down his dog after a tearful farewell.
Damn
it! I can watch entire legions of Skrulls get killed, but one give me one giant
grasshopper with the personality of a loyal dog getting put down, and I blubber like a 3 year old…I swear!
Kliklak’s
sacrifice won’t be in vain, as Kamandi is inconsolable. And an depressed but
morally righteous hero will always take on the established corrupt power
structure, as demonstrated below.
It
starts with Kamandi realizing that he is little more than a talented pet to
these animal-men.
He
almost succumbs to the charms of the lovely and innocent Spirit, but then pulls
a full-on Charlton Heston. Unfortunately, that just gets him the butt of one of
the panther people’s rifles. Seems that’s a common reaction among the
humanimals, as that's exactly what Heston got too.
Luckily
for Kamandi he still has a few friends with influence.
Influence
they use in his favor to bargain for his freedom, but at a cost that Kamandi
might find a bit steep. That’s left for the next issue however.
As they leave, we have this expository reveal...
He
almost bit it! Nice ending.
I
can admit that I don’t feel a great vibe for the character or setting of
Kamandi, but I do love the art. Jack’s dialogue can sometimes be a bit much to
take, but I found his more restrained hand her agreeable with the story he was
weaving. There were a few bits of expository dialogue that I though unnecessary
or leading, but all in all, I enjoyed Kamandi and would pick up another if I
saw it at a reasonable price.
The
art alone makes them worth the find.
People often overlook the fact that while Jack Kirby was a writer/artist while at DC, he was also his own editor. So there wasn't anyone to reel in his concepts or dialogue for pacing's sake. Kirby always did better work with an "executive producer" of some kind, which is probably why his pairing with Joe Simon was so fortuitous. Even the one thing he did with Simon in DC's Bronze Age, the new Sandman superhero character, is more concise and pointed than anything in the Fourth World or Kamandi.
ReplyDeleteYeah, I noticed. The next book I am reviewing has similar issues and I saw that Kirby got Marvel to allow him a lot of editorial latitude with Archie Goodwin on as "Consulting Editor". Not even sure what that would mean. In my mind that implies an almost blank check for pacing, story control, and rejecting cutting pages down or out. In comparison, this Kamandi issue looks pretty good. The next book I review has little dramatic build-up and the story ends on a cliffhanger, just not a satisfying one.
DeleteBut man, that art!
Great review! The thing that always grates my teeth when reading Kirby's writing is that. . .Every! Sentence! Ends! With! An! Exclamation! Point! But I guess the art and ideas make up for it. He truly was a comic legend.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
DeleteI feel the same, that dialogue was Jack's Achilles heel. He still was one of the most inventive and creative men in comics, in spite of that fact.